When your viewpoint character is the least interesting character in the story, this might be a problem. I'd rather read about Borne. I'd rather read about Wick. I'd rather read about 'the Magician.' I'd rather read about Morde the giant bear. I'd rather read about the mysterious scientists in the Company building. I'd rather read …
Painfully obvious metaphors
Borne is a child. The person who found Borne feels like a mother to 'him', and is raising him with the man she lives with. They argue about Borne a lot like parents in a broken home might. Borne doesn't know about the world or himself and gets hurt because of his innocence, and then …
Writing faster
Ten thousand words on the new project (the one I started, then stopped, then--guess what--started again) in a bit more than a month since I started it. This is pretty slow to be sure, but it's much faster than the glacial pace I crawled at for the first part of my previous novel, which took …
Name one
Name a first person novel where the character isn't annoying, stupid, or an asshole--I'd like to read it. Maybe it's because people never see their own faults, I suppose that's realistic but it's still annoying. (almost) Every novel I've read in first person the character does irrational, stupid, or asshole-ish things, and never acknowledges it …
Chapter titles
Something Borne is doing--which I'm sure is done, but I can't think of another time I've seen it--is giving each chapter a provocative title. I really like this idea and might try it out to see if it fits in any of my writings. A chapter titled 'what I found in [character's] room' for example, …
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